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~Kira~
Wednesday, 28 September 2011
Tuesday, 20 September 2011
New Ending For Chapter 31 (Read My Last Post! I had t re-do it, so there. here you go.)
“Wait!”
I screamed. Katherine rolled her eyes.
“Ugh,
what now?”
“I
dropped my earring back at the gas station.” I said, quickly removing my left
earring and dropping it on the floor. Katherine groaned.
“You
have 30 seconds starting now.” I opened the car door and dashed back to the gas
station, unsure of exactly what I was doing. Before I knew it, I found myself
standing next to Alec’s unconscious body. I leaned over and brushed his dark
hair out of his eyes. I wasn’t exactly sure what I was intending to do at this
point-I hadn’t really thought it out that far.
“Why
does this have to be so complicated?” I wondered aloud. It was only a little
less than a year ago that I’d been a normal thirteen year old girl, living my
normal thirteen year old life. There was never any reason for me to run from anyone.
I didn’t have to lie or stab my friends in the back, no pun intended. But even
though I hated everything that was going on, I had no regrets, not even about
what I was doing now.
“I’ll
come back for you, I promise. Then we’ll have an eternity for me to explain
everything.” I smiled. “I love you.” I leaned down and gently kissed his now
cold cheek. “It’ll all work out. I promise.” I whispered. I quickly scribbled
down a note with a scrap piece of paper and a pen I found in my pocket and put
it in his hand, curling his motionless fingers around it. I heard my friends’
voices coming from out of the store and made a run for the van, jumping in the passenger’s
side quickly and putting on my seatbelt.
“Took
you long enough.” Katherine said.
“I
couldn’t find it.” I looked down at the floor, finding the spot where I’d
dropped my earring earlier. “Oh, there it is. It must’ve fallen out when I got
in the car.” I picked it up and put it back in my ear. Katherine rolled her
eyes.
“Of
course it did.” She said in an annoyed tone. “Are you ready now?” I nodded.
“Good.” Katherine hammered down on the gas pedal and
we sped off onto the busy streets of New
York City.
Ripping Off The CW (and other stories about my plagiaristic mind)
So you know the end of the last chapter when Kieyra does all that romantic crap??
Yeah, i took that from the CW. But i didn't mean to, i swear! Last night when I thought of it I thought it was my idea.
Well about five minutes ago i decided to watch an episode of Vampire Diaries (totally forgetting how much i ripped off of it). One of my favourite episodes, actually. When i turned it on (it's on my ipod) it was near the end, so i just started watching from there.
I'm not going to bother explaining too much, so...just watch the scene. Skip to the beginning part where you see a moon. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=muREqJ7ahPI&feature=related. Watch what Katherine does.
So i've basically got it down action for action, word for word. Well, sort of. Katherine's line is "I love you Stefan. We will be together again. I promise." Then she kisses him. And the song playing is one of my favourite songs. Also this is one of my favourite scenes, next to this one, where Damon Salvatore spews his feelings about Elena (refer to the beginning of chapter 10) and basically all of TVD episode 2x09 (refer to chapter 6). Yep, oh and in chapter 24 i actually steal a line word for word, but i give credit. That's episode 2x01 i think.
So yeah. Please don't hate me!!! I DIDN'T MEAN TO DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xoxo,
~Kira~
Yeah, i took that from the CW. But i didn't mean to, i swear! Last night when I thought of it I thought it was my idea.
Well about five minutes ago i decided to watch an episode of Vampire Diaries (totally forgetting how much i ripped off of it). One of my favourite episodes, actually. When i turned it on (it's on my ipod) it was near the end, so i just started watching from there.
I'm not going to bother explaining too much, so...just watch the scene. Skip to the beginning part where you see a moon. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=muREqJ7ahPI&feature=related. Watch what Katherine does.
So i've basically got it down action for action, word for word. Well, sort of. Katherine's line is "I love you Stefan. We will be together again. I promise." Then she kisses him. And the song playing is one of my favourite songs. Also this is one of my favourite scenes, next to this one, where Damon Salvatore spews his feelings about Elena (refer to the beginning of chapter 10) and basically all of TVD episode 2x09 (refer to chapter 6). Yep, oh and in chapter 24 i actually steal a line word for word, but i give credit. That's episode 2x01 i think.
So yeah. Please don't hate me!!! I DIDN'T MEAN TO DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xoxo,
~Kira~
Chapter 31-Kieyra Gordon, Traitor.
Sorry for the wait! Enjoy! You better 'cause i gotta go to school now! Well actually in 25 minutes. but whatever. Just enjoy, comment, tell your friends, whatever the hell you wanna do.
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I
woke up to the sound of my friends singing obnoxious road trip songs.
“Good
morning sunshine.” Alec said, smiling.
“Where
are we?” I asked, sitting up straight and stretching out my arms.
“Almost
in New York City.”
Alec replied. My phone buzzed in my pocket.
New Message
From: Katherine P.
Plan starts now. Meet me in the Gary’s Gasoline washroom.
It’s a gas station just outside of NYC, next to an old-fashioned diner. Make
sure you’re not being followed.
I groaned, stuffing my phone back in my
pocket.
“What
is it?” Alec asked.
“Nothing,
I just slept with my neck twisted the wrong way. That’s all.” I attempted (and
failed) to crack my neck in emphasis. “We should stop for a bathroom break
soon. I heard there’s a place nearby- Gary’s
Gasoline. It’s near a diner. And while we’re there, we should get gas; it’s
cheaper there.” I suggested, hoping I didn’t sound too obvious. Alec nodded.
The
next fifteen minutes were filled by an incredibly awkward silence, which was
even more awkwardly interrupted by Tegan saying “are we stopping soon? ‘Cause I
have to go to the bathroom,” just as we pulled into the gas station parking
lot.
“We’re
stopping here.” I said. I looked around, just to make sure we were in the right
place, and then stepped out of the car. I waited outside for a few minutes
while they “relieved themselves” and then went in. The first people I found
were Tegan and Elena.
“Hey,
guys, why don’t you get us some snacks?” I gave Tegan a ten dollar
bill-probably the last allowance I’d ever see. “My treat.” I added.
“Thanks!”
Tegan said. I got to the washroom just as Jade was walking out.
“Hey,
um, can I ask you something?” I asked.
“Yeah,
sure. What is it?”
“I
need you to promise me that, no matter what, we’ll stay friends.” Jade looked
at me confusedly.
“Of
course.”
“No
matter what I do.”
“Yeah…what’s
this about?”
“Nothing.
I just wanted to make sure.” I said, walking around Jade and into the women’s
washroom. The first thing I did was check to make sure there was no one in
there. There was only one occupied stall-a pair of black high heels.
Katherine’s high heels.
“Katherine?”
I asked in a small voice, afraid someone might hear me. The stall door swung
open.
“Yes?”
Katherine’s familiar smile calmed me down a bit. She was holding something that
resembled a tranquillizer dart-something similar to what Tegan had stabbed me
with earlier this year.
“Your
vervain.” She said, handing me the dart. I put it in my jacket pocket. “It’s
enough to make him black out.” She added, “Just throw him in the bushes or
something.” Katherine shrugged and ran off so fast it seemed as if she’d
disappeared into thin air. I walked out into the store and looked around to
make sure my friends were still looking for snacks, which they were. Then I
slowly made my way back to the van.
Alec
was leaning against the van, patiently waiting for me and my friends. With each
step I took towards him I felt worse and worse, and by the time I was less than
five feet away from him I felt a tear drip down from my eye. No, I commanded myself, you will not cry. Not now, not here. I
quickly wiped the tear from my eye and took a deep breath.
“Hey,
are you okay?” Alec asked. I nodded.
“Yeah,
I’m fine.” I lied, but he could tell from the way my voice cracked that I was
lying.
“What’s
wrong?”
“I’m
sorry.” I said, feeling the tears coming back again.
“Sorry
for what?”
“I’m
sorry.” I sniffed, wiping my eyes with my shirt sleeve. Alec came forward and pulled
me into a hug.
“I’m
sorry, I really am.” I sobbed.
“Sorry,
for what, love? What is it?”
“I’m
sorry for what I’m about to do.”
“What
do you mean?” He asked, confused. At that moment, I quickly grabbed the vervain
dart out of my pocket and stabbed Alec in the back.
“Ah!
What the hell?” I felt him weakening in my arms, and I pulled the dart out of
his back and shoved him into the bushes.
“Ugh,
don’t cry, you’re gonna make me sad
too.” Katherine said, tapping me on the shoulder.
“Thanks
for being so sensitive.” I said sarcastically. Katherine rolled her eyes. I
opened the back door of the van and dumped all of my friends’ stuff out as
Katherine climbed in the driver’s seat and started the engine. Then I joined
her in the front seat of the car and she started driving.
“Wait!”
I screamed. Katherine rolled her eyes.
“Ugh,
what now?”
“I
dropped my earring back at the gas station.” I said, quickly removing my left
earring and dropping it on the floor. Katherine groaned.
“You
have 30 seconds starting now.” I opened the car door and dashed back to the gas
station, unsure of exactly what I was doing. Before I knew it, I found myself
standing next to Alec’s unconscious body. I leaned over and brushed his dark
hair out of his eyes.
“I’ll
come back for you, I promise.” I whispered, “I love you.” I lightly kissed his
cheek. “I promise.” I heard my friends’ voices coming from out of the store and
made a run for the van, jumping in the passenger’s side quickly and putting on
my seatbelt.
“Took
you long enough.” Katherine said.
“I
couldn’t find it.” I looked down at the floor, finding the spot where I’d
dropped my earring earlier. “Oh, there it is. It must’ve fallen out when I got
in the car.” I picked it up and put it back in my ear. Katherine rolled her
eyes.
“Of
course it did.” She said in an annoyed tone. “Are you ready now?” I nodded.
“Good.” Katherine hammered down on the gas pedal and
we sped off onto the busy streets of New
York City.
Monday, 12 September 2011
Pissed Off
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What is it with you people?
Are you all ashamed to say you read this blog??? Huh???? HUH!!!!!
Sorry, I...uh...overreacted a little bit there.
Anyways, i'm still mad 'cause no one follows this blog (other than the people i know) so there is a slight possibility i will not post The Hole anymore. I'll still e-mail the people i know and send them the chapters, but I might not post on here. This is too much like High School. By that I mean like when you don't talk to someone just because your friends think that they're "uncool" and you only talk to that person if you two are alone. Trust me, i've been that "forbidden" girl before. I guess any normal person wouldn't get pissed off, but i do. So yeah.
Comment???? Haha, that was a rhetorical question. I know you won't. Go ahead and prove me wrong. I dare you.
What is it with you people?
Are you all ashamed to say you read this blog??? Huh???? HUH!!!!!
Sorry, I...uh...overreacted a little bit there.
Anyways, i'm still mad 'cause no one follows this blog (other than the people i know) so there is a slight possibility i will not post The Hole anymore. I'll still e-mail the people i know and send them the chapters, but I might not post on here. This is too much like High School. By that I mean like when you don't talk to someone just because your friends think that they're "uncool" and you only talk to that person if you two are alone. Trust me, i've been that "forbidden" girl before. I guess any normal person wouldn't get pissed off, but i do. So yeah.
Comment???? Haha, that was a rhetorical question. I know you won't. Go ahead and prove me wrong. I dare you.
Thursday, 8 September 2011
I'm Just...at a loss for words right now.
So as you know, this blog has gotten about 7 hundred page views.
I've never really thought about it much, but on the new blogger interface you can see more of your stats. so i did.I found out that this blog has been viewed 589 times in Canada, 123 in the USA, 6 in Singapore, 5 in Germany, 5 in the UK, 4 in Denmark, 3 in Russia, 2 in Finland, 1 in Spain and 1 in Saudi Arabia.
Wow. I mean, I was 100% sure that there were only three people reading this, but apparently not. Apparently there are 500 some people in Canada that are reading this, and i don't know who you are. I guess you consider this an asset though; if you decide to steal my idea there's nothing really i can do about it. You know, except sue you for thousands of dollars...
Seriously though, i will be pissed.
Also, there are 123 people in all of America reading this. Thanks, for that. I love you guys. But Canada, you rock!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU CANADA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're my peeps. And countries out of North America...Meh. You could do better. Especially you, Spain and Saudi Arabia.
So yeah. That's all i really wanted to say. Love you guys and bye!!!!!!!!!!
~Kira~
(Ps. Blogger i'd really appreciate it if i got recognition for promoting your new interface!!!!!! Its awesome!!!!)
I've never really thought about it much, but on the new blogger interface you can see more of your stats. so i did.I found out that this blog has been viewed 589 times in Canada, 123 in the USA, 6 in Singapore, 5 in Germany, 5 in the UK, 4 in Denmark, 3 in Russia, 2 in Finland, 1 in Spain and 1 in Saudi Arabia.
Wow. I mean, I was 100% sure that there were only three people reading this, but apparently not. Apparently there are 500 some people in Canada that are reading this, and i don't know who you are. I guess you consider this an asset though; if you decide to steal my idea there's nothing really i can do about it. You know, except sue you for thousands of dollars...
Seriously though, i will be pissed.
Also, there are 123 people in all of America reading this. Thanks, for that. I love you guys. But Canada, you rock!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU CANADA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're my peeps. And countries out of North America...Meh. You could do better. Especially you, Spain and Saudi Arabia.
So yeah. That's all i really wanted to say. Love you guys and bye!!!!!!!!!!
~Kira~
(Ps. Blogger i'd really appreciate it if i got recognition for promoting your new interface!!!!!! Its awesome!!!!)
Tuesday, 6 September 2011
Reveal Yourselves!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok, so i know for a fact that it's more than just my mom, my aunt and my dad reading this. I check my stats. So here it is. I'd REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY like it if you made yourselves known. Leave a comment. follow publicly. I don't care, i just want you to make yourselves known. Or email me!!!! theholeofficial@gmail.com!!! JUST DO SOMETHING!!!!!!!!!!!! Please, i'm begging. This is getting annoying.
~Kira~
~Kira~
Idea...And There's Something In It For You!!!
so i'm going to make another blog, and it's going to have trivia questions about The Hole. There will be a points system...different points awarded depending on the difficulty level. There will be a winner of each question, and the person with the most points at the end of each week will get a special reward...so yeah. comment if you will participate, the link is http://theholetrivia.blogspot.com , the first question is up!!
~Kira~
~Kira~
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